Oct 2, 2009

The Aran Jumper

The Aran jumper in this picture stands out a mile and poses endless possibilities. Why is she wearing it? What’s the relevance? Where did she get it? Was it a present? Is she wearing it for comfort? Is she just cold? Is there any relevance, and if not - should it be in the picture at all?

If you draw attention to something in your writing that stands out like the Aran cardigan, you had better have a reason why you have shown it to the reader.

Be careful what you draw attention to.

Just a thought


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